Friday, January 20, 2023

Plan of Action

 Schedule

2/3/23 - I will have a completed storyboard.

2/4/23-2/6/23 - I will gather all necessary props and put together costumes.

2/6/23-2/8/23 - I will start and finish filming the scenes that take place in the characters house.

2/9/23-2/12/23 - I will film the lunch scenes for the short film.

    Within these times for filming any back-ups or retakes should be completed for all scenes.

2/13/23-2/15/23 - I will edit the short film.

2/16/23 - I  will finalize the short film which will include both the filming and editing being finished.


Location

I will film at one of my mom's rental property's for the film. The Scenes at home will be at several different homes based on my mothers availability. The scenes at a cafe will be filmed at homey style cafe called " The Little Coffee Shop". This coffee shop specializes in coffee and authentic fresh pastries (10732 Wiles Rd, Coral Springs, FL 33076). The scene taken a lunch restaurant will be taken at a Chipotle. Which is food chain restaurant of americanized mexican food. (4220 N State Rd 7, Coral Springs, FL 33073)


Participants

I will not be acing in this film. My job we be to direct, film , and edit.  I will be using my friends as actors. Considering the film surrounds one character name Lola , my main actor will be friend Addison Walker. My friend Dartamian will play Alex. The actors for Sophi, Clara, and Lola's mom have yet to be decided due to possible actors having an altercation in schedule.

Health and Safety

For the filming of this short film there will be no chance of harm for anybody involved. However, everyone in my group will have a cell phone on their person that can be used to call for help if the need occurred.

Props

My group will utilize props such as cell phones, makeup, clothing, and food. If my group finds that more props are needed than my group plans on going to a store to purchase the prop or finding something else that can be used. However, since my group's short film deals with realism, every prop will likely be available at one of my group members' homes.

Costumes

The costumes used in my group's short film will be everyday clothing as the characters in the short film are supposed to look like real people. However, based on how filming goes one character may wear a hat.

Back-Up Plans

My Locations are set in stone considering its more documentary style focusing on real topics. If by chance my mo will not let me use our rental properties I will film at my own house. For the main actor Lola I have several other friends that are interested in playing her role.




Friday, January 13, 2023

Screenplay


 INT. SUBURBAN HOME - DAY

This is the home of Lola. Lola and Clara have been best friends since childhood. Lola gets ready to hangout with friends by picking out her outfits. Outfits that were not selected were thrown on the floor and beauty props were scattered across the room.


LOLA

(VOICE OVER)

Atelophobia; The fear of imperfection. As a young child, women were taught how to act, speak, and look. We were exposed to models that we looked nothing like and were told their body was our goal. We were never taught that it's okay to be imperfect, it's okay to have flaws.  We were never told that the standard of beauty is not definite and we are the ones who define it, and we never saw our own beauty.



EXT. LUNCH CAFE - DAY

Lola and Clara’s friend group meets for brunch. They have casual conversation while making jokes. Although they are all friends, not everyone in the group has the best personality.


LOLA

(spoken dialogue)

Cute top Sophi! Where did you get it?


SOPHI

Thanks! Ummm….. I am not really sure. It was either Pacsun or Urban. You can borrow it sometime. I'm not sure it would fit you though.


CLARA

Woah Sophi!. Don't be so rude I would kill to have Lola’s body.


The rest of the group conversation continues but Lola becomes very distant.  Lola seems inattentive as if her mind is elsewhere. When the food arrives everyone but Lola is eating their food.


ALEX

Hey Lola you barely touched your food are you gonna finish that?


LOLA

I’m stuffed honestly. You can have the rest if you want


ALEX

Don't have to tell me twice. Pass that here!


Int Lola’s Home - Night

The scene cuts to Lola at home in her kitchen. She looks distressed rummaging frantically through her kitchen. Lola grabs food out of the fridge and pantry and quickly runs up the stairs to her room. When she arrives to her room she is impulsively eating lots of food

After she is done Lola goes to the bathroom. Lola is in the bathroom carefully examining herself in the bathroom. She touches her stomach, arms, and legs with a face full of disgust. She starts profusely crying thinking of the comment her “friend” Sophi said earlier. She starts forcing herself to throw up what little she ate throughout the day.




Int Home- Morning


Months Later Lola’s Mom found out about her once secret. Crying profusely her mother is in shock. She can’t fathom how she didn’t know sooner. They argue continuously until they both agree for recovery. Lola is hesitant but she doesn’t want to deal with this mental torment.


LOLA’S MOM 

(SPOKEN DIALOGUE)


 I can't believe you have been doing this


Baby you’re perfect. Your body is perfect. Why are you starving yourself


Lola stares blankly at her Mom. She can't come up with the right words to say . She starts choking up crying. Throughout all the guilt coursing through her heart she feels relieved. Like so much weight has been lifted off her chest and she can finally breathe.

 

 LOLA

What? Do you think I like living like this? That I chose to feel like this? Look like this? I just want to feel normal and loved-


LOLA’S MOM

I love you. You are worth more than this. You are perfect just the way you are


LOLA

I don;t need help! I just want to feel normal. I don't see myself when I look in the mirror anymore. I stare at a whole different person and I ask myself where I went wrong. 


LOLA”S MOM 

 Your Father and I are going to get you help. You’ll meet a therapist who can actually help


Lola’s mom quickly grabs her and hugs her. They finish the conversation both in tears as they both only want her to recover.



Int Cafe - Mid Day

Months later Lola has a new relationship with food. She is healthy and happy and sees the world in new colors. She can freely eat out with friends without worrying about her consequences when she gets home.




(VOICE OVER)

We are all born beautiful. The greatest tragedy is being convinced we are not. We look back at victims of this and we ask ourselves were they too soft or was the world too harsh. But Lola learned that she must step into the path of growth. That in the end you are fighting for you. And that you need to love yourself first before someone else can love you.Lily collins says it best  “Asking for help is never a sign of weakness. It’s one of the bravest things you can do” 



Critical Reflection

  The film Atelophobia was inspired by its definition.; The fear of being imperfect. This definition was entirely different that an obsessiv...